Once we had begun editing our short film we realised that the voice over didn't quite match what was on the film and so we decided that we needed to change it. We had to move around a few scenes in the filming and then add a few lines too the script.
INT. Characters house- morning
Blank screen
Underwater noise can be heard, characters eyes open
Fade in:
Gets out of bed and walks to the window and looks out
HARVEY (V.O):
Another day
Walks downstairs
HARVEY (V.O):
I guess I’m used to being alone now
Looks into cupboard for food
HARVEY (V.O):
It has been a while after all
Sits down and eats his ‘breakfast’
HARVEY (V.O):
Where is everyone? Why am I here?
EXT. Walks out the house and closes the door to go to the park
HARVEY (V.O):
Obviously I miss my family
Waves at his next door neighbour and she walks straight passed him as if he wasn’t there
HARVEY (V.O):
I feel like I’m the only one here
Walks along the road towards the park
HARVEY (V.O):
You get bored being alone
Gets to the park
HARVEY (V.O):
I’m trying to find things to do to occupy myself
Walking in the park
HARVEY (V.O):
Sometimes I walk for days
Walks over to the swings
HARVEY (V.O):
Or try out new things to pass the time
INT. Wakes up in his room looks over to his bed side table and finds some flowers.
HARVEY (V.O):
Weird stuff keeps happening
Throws the flowers on the floor
HARVEY (V.O):
Flowers by my bed, I don’t know how that happened.
Walks over to his laptop and looks at Facebook
HARVEY (V.O):
All my friends writing on my Facebook that they miss me, where are they?
Walks downstairs and picks up his wet shoes
HARVEY (V.O):
My shoes are always wet
EXT. Walks out of the house and to his car
HARVEY (V.O):
And my car is always filled with water, I don’t understand why
INT. Walks back into the house
Starts playing with a pack of cards plays with a pack of cards
HARVEY (V.O):
How did I get here?
HARVEY (V.O):
How did it happen?
Wakes up, puts his glasses on and checks his phone
HARVEY (V.O):
This is the 56th day I’ve been alone now
Newspaper article flashes up.
Fades to black
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